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When introducing a major but not central time-travel element to a sci-fi/fantasy novel, what are the biggest pitfalls to avoid?

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  • Sacri_ordines_by_charism_small
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    Above all, make sure it's
    a) actually needed to advance the story, and
    b) applied to the entire world in a thoroughly logical fashion (i.e. what would the world have been like if this form of time travel was here for many centuries? What will the future bring with this technology available? Is it likely some villain will render the protagonist's hard work pointless with some future time travelling of her/his own?

    2ndly: Pitfalls to avoid, As in; old tired tropes to avoid?

    This page is good for it:
    http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TimeTravel
    includes this lovely quote:
    Time travel is theoretically impossible, but I wouldn't want to give it up as a plot gimmick.
    — Isaac Asimov

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  • Enso_circle_small
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    I really get bored with the explanations of whatever time travel schtick the author chooses to follow. Whether it be the butterfly effect, killing grandfathers or Hitler, or cascading and infinite dimensions theory, keep the explanations short.

    One of my favorite treatments is in "the Eyre Affair." Where time travel crops up (which it does, a lot) the characters have assumed knowledge and the author gives the reader credit for understanding the theories. It is nice to be treated by authors as having a clue.

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  • N684325377_6966_small
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    Right. I think the first problem that a reader might have with this device is the plainness of the fact that the author is using it as plot-hole spackle.

    Work it in, I guess. If it's popping up without any foreshadow, do it at the very beginning of the book.

    Oh, and read this: http://www.cracked.com/article_18564_6-time-travel-realities-doc-brown-didnt-warn-us-about.html

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  • Subcultureoftwo_small
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    I agree with Adam: read that article and maybe address a few of those things, don't use time-travel to cover plot holes, and don't make the explanation of it overly technical. In "The Time Traveler's Wife," for example, the main character travels due to a genetic disorder that is NEVER explained in the book. And that's fine, because it's not central to the story.

    Watch out for paradoxes.

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  • 1300740018-lenin5_small
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    So being your own grandfather is taboo... can you believe that, just don't have your characters screw away putting semen in places they shouldn't or accepting semen from someone they shouldn't.

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